Monday

the metal tingled my tongue
he said move and i'll shoot
then told me to go get some crisps and beer
when he put the gun back in my mouth
i asked him to pull

4 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

As a piece of writing, it's fucking disturbing enough, so deadened and matter-of-fact.

Knowing the reality of it, I wish I wish it hadn't happened to you. And I'm glad it wasn't any worse.

06:20  
Blogger Wolf said...

sharp as a tack as a slap as a crack in the night.
good to know your unscathed, better even that you could pull this out of it.

13:07  
Blogger Nicki said...

oh my god ... i was going to say, wow what a phenomenal piece of writing ... but it actually happened? oh my god, rigby. all my love, beautiful, beautiful rigby.

12:59  
Blogger rigby said...

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04:26  

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