the metal tingled my tongue
he said move and i'll shoot
then told me to go get some crisps and beer
when he put the gun back in my mouth
i asked him to pull
he said move and i'll shoot
then told me to go get some crisps and beer
when he put the gun back in my mouth
i asked him to pull


4 Comments:
As a piece of writing, it's fucking disturbing enough, so deadened and matter-of-fact.
Knowing the reality of it, I wish I wish it hadn't happened to you. And I'm glad it wasn't any worse.
sharp as a tack as a slap as a crack in the night.
good to know your unscathed, better even that you could pull this out of it.
oh my god ... i was going to say, wow what a phenomenal piece of writing ... but it actually happened? oh my god, rigby. all my love, beautiful, beautiful rigby.
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